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Wednesday, March 23, 2011

UhOh I'm thinking again!

Thoughts that go in my head are usually profound and often to complex for the human range of understanding. So I'll include you in the ones that are a little more simple and not so epic. For example the capital W is way to overpowering in a title. When it's the first letter then it's ok but when it's placed somewhere behind the first word, woah it comes off too strong. I discovered this by writing a paper for my english class. I haven't been able to find a proper title yet and I am starting to like the one that I've come up with recently. My essay is about the amount of energy and emissions that a hybrid vehicle produces over a different car. I have come to the discovery that hybrid vehicles are not to good for the environment and takes close to an entire lifetime of a normal car to catch up to other cars. I have properly titled the essay as "Thanks Hybrid, Now Green Peace Will Destroy the World!" but the W in Will just leaps of the page and strangles you. No longer is green peace for the world but now it WILL DESTROY!!! the world. I'm not trying to be so strong in the title more kind of like a gentle... green peace you're not really making a good move in purchasing the hybrid cars of the future because it is causing a lot of pollution without you knowing about it and because the marketing is aimed towards you and your friends it's going to destroy the world quicker then it already is now especially if there is such a great demand for the cars that they become the norm and the energy costs that are already high are going to increase so please stop buying hybrid cars please. Thats kind of the direction that I would like to do with the title so I'm looking at a better word then will or I just don't capitalize it. Kinda something like "Thanks Hybrid, Now Green Peace is Destroying the World." this is a little better. Still that D is now too much... Hmmm new thought. My body hurts from working out, dragons are real and unicorns play in my backyard... see I tell you my thoughts are just too much for people to understand.

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